Sunday, June 17, 2012

Class Assignment

I was required to write a short story for a class; I'm posting it below, for those who are interested. But beware--it's longer than what I usually write.


They’re a marvel to any person from a third world country, a miracle, a mystery. They’re excessively ordinary, a place to buy food. Every walk of life enters them, and they hold miniature examples of all that happens in life. I shop at them. I could start naming the ones everyone knows: Wal-Mart, spreading all over the US, Sam’s Club’s blue letters welcoming large families (or Southern moms who feed armies, like mine), but there is one that holds a special interest for me. I work at one, my neighborhood Hy-Vee grocery store. I know its rules, rhythms, commands, and resulting sales. I know the actions, human streams, ebbs and flows of action that it will always have.
Working at one, the way I see things changed. It started simply, straightforwardly, an awareness of other workers, no matter the store. I would start thanking cashiers by name, looking them in the eyes and seeing them. I tried to make them laugh, giving them a moment of real personal interaction in hours that dragged on. Or perhaps I stayed quiet, not forcing them to chat, watching the speed of their hands, as fast as concentration could make them. I would help bag my family’s groceries if the sacker was busy (I was fourteen then). I would bring a cart or two in if they were in arms reach, especially in the heat of the Iowan summer. Little bits of effort, unexpected kindness, things that can change an attitude, that can make a whole day better.
I became familiar with my store’s contents, in the carts or on the shelves. I knew the people by heart, the four-year-old hand grasping a cookie from the bakery, clinging with the other hand to the rolling metal carts, taking a firmer grasp when it slows as the shopper reaches on the top shelf for something. There are fathers, stopping on the way home to pick up milk (at $3.62 a gallon), watching a miniature, younger version of him buying a candy bar, though his choice might have switched from the orange Reeses to the dark Snickers. From the old men buying coffee and newspapers to the little girls buying Ring-Pops, the grocery stores are familiar, similar; I know them, their unchanging outlines.
The pace in a grocery store changes, however. I have been there at six-thirty in the morning, wide awake and hurrying through silent, florescent isles with canned pie filling, and I have been there at ten-thirty at night, the customers happy and excited while I drag myself through the door to go home (I’m a morning person, and they are most definitely not). But the pace—the pace changes. The morning is a silent, steady walk, as the boxes carrying what the shelves won’t hold are put back in back, and the shoppers know exactly what they want—and that’s to get in and get out. I try not to chatter in the morning, for it’s not welcome, except at the inside Starbuck’s, its green sign always glowing above a line. Next to it the inside cafĂ© is busy, the booths’ cushioned benches nearly filled, while the tables hold stacks of empty plates covered in syrupy remains.
The pace changes as eight o’clock nears, and I watch every person in the Starbuck’s line check the time, from the lady in the business suit to the man with the over-gelled hair. Work is nearing, and coffee is needed for the hard workday; time is now precious, and impatience is apparent—and too often audible—among the customers in line. From my station in Customer Service, yards away, I wince for the barista, her green apron stained and her ears filled with complaints; can’t they see she’s doing her best? She has the longest line. My customers only want newspapers and a smile, while the people in the checkout lines narrow their choices to a can of orange juice and a small breakfast substitute, a granola bar or crispy doughnut. They’re not hungry, only aware of the need they’ll have for energy. Am I the only one who loves mornings, who tastes being alive?
Bored by my lack of companions, my absence from the work and energy, I watch the checkers. They work at the registers, the domain known as “the front.” They aren’t worried yet, that won’t come till nine. Nine is when a rush comes, nine is when every checker wants a sacker so they needn’t do two jobs at once. (Why nine? Perhaps because all the non-morning people are up; perhaps because all the moms have dropped their kids off at school.) Nine is when I ache to leave my slow post and go up there, where the action is, where I can help people, my slim fingers seizing, dropping, grabbing handles and setting firmly in the cart. But I cannot leave my post at nine; 9 might turn out to be some whimsical customer who wants a carton of cigarettes. I’m not allowed to keep them waiting.
But the busiest time of day is 4-4:45 (except Wine and Spirits—then it’s after five—or Fridays). Everyone gets off work; everyone wants to get their grocery shopping done before they get home. No one likes going out again after finally getting home, so the grocery store is a stop along the way—an hour-long stop at times, as the grocery list gets longer and the checkbook gets thinner. Carts roll to the checkouts, overflowing carts—often with a bright yellow Cheerio box sliding off the top of the pile. The sacker in his teal-green apron from produce, the health-market, or stocking the freezer, coming to help with the rush, groans inwardly as he smiles pleasantly at the customer, for he has to pack it all back in the cart again. I watch sympathetically, when I can. I’m busy too. My line is long, for once I’m not cleaning behind my counter. But at the front there’s so much to do—and they’ll probably want help out to their cars. The sackers disappear into the parking lot to help them, the lines get longer, and the checkers are bombarded with the never-ceasing beep as food slides over scanners.
But that’s on a normal day.
Then—there are sales days. They’re generally on Thursday and Friday, or Friday and Saturday; they always come in pairs. On sales days there are no rushes, no pauses, no breaks. There are only cashier’s fingers flying over the touch-screen keyboard, unending hums from every register for the unpredictable collection of items endlessly moved and scanned (Marshmallow Cream, rubbing alcohol, and Camel Wide Pack cigarettes? Really?). There is always a line, always a customer, never enough time. A smile, brief “How are you doing? Did you find everything?” (questions I still repeat in my sleep from my first days up front) are all there is time for. There are only people, items, and speed, speed, speed. We come, we work, we breath, we find it’s time for break, then it’s time to leave.
That’s how it is up front, at least. Behind Customer Service is slightly different. There I sell paper and cardboard lottery, fancy event tickets, and green city recycling stickers; I help customers electronically pay bills (MidAmerica’s my favorite), send and weigh mail, return perfectly packaged unopened items from complaining clients, recycle nasty, smelly beer bottles and hug, blue, 5-gallon water jugs…I do a lot. Plus sell newspapers. I run, and run, and run, the length of the long counter, back and forth, dancing through our machines to get what the customer wants. In between the mad dances that go in circles at the music’s fast-paced beat I restock plastic bags and put pretty blue-and-white postal boxes in their designated areas. I clean fanatically; I’m one of the few that do back there. I descend weekly on the accumulated dust with unshakable intent. I keep myself busy, not bored, and my pace, sales days or not, encompasses more feet than the checkers’; I love it that way.
But there was one Saturday, one sales Saturday, where someone wasn’t following the invisible, inaudible, undeniable beat. There was one Saturday where a single moment changed my point of view. The front, the customers, checkers, and courtesy were frantically filling sacks or unloading carts. Behind Customer Service, I hung up the black, professional wall-phone and saw him. He was an old man in a dark blue shirt, walking with a cane. The cane was a dark, quiet brown, and it slowed him down as he walked across the chaotic front. Sadness slowed my motions for a moment, sadness for him—to be restrained to such a pace in such a place. I know one day I’ll be forced to keep the same slow pace, to have chores to do, to watch everyone else doing them and getting them done while knowing that I’d be the slow one. I’d be the one in the way, I’d be the one that was to be pitied. I winced away from the thought.
And then he stopped. There, dead enter, in front of the express registers but out of their way, he stopped and looked around. And then I saw him differently, my view turned on its head, because he didn’t stop to rest. He didn’t lean on his cane, didn’t make a face or grumble. He stopped to see.
He was not restrained, not forced to a slow pace—it was his choice to stop. It was not an arrogant, deliberate choice—it was a serene, inquiring one. He walked with his eyes open to items, colors, people, chaos. He stopped to take a deeper look at the rest of us, rushing around, because he was calmly curious. He looked at his surroundings, moving his head from one side to another slowly, once, taking it in. We had chores and speed; he had an interest in life. But that interest in life was not frantic, not craving success and love and life to the fullest, not a deep desire to be filled, but a still interest that allowed him to take in what life was and enjoy it without the rush that hid so much discontent in the lives of everyone around him. We were chaos; he was calm.
I yank myself back from my staring and realized a customer was standing at the counter. Wait, there were more behind her. I’m still employed, paid to dance to a tune I’d forgotten to a moment. I suddenly didn’t want to join. But the customers are lined up, I call over the intercom for help between one breath and the next, and my fingers dance the 7069 to ring up Powerball again and again and again (the pot was 63 million that day). I did not see the gentleman again; and then it was time to leave.
As I walk out the door I wondered, of course, if I imagined it, if he was nothing more than an older person stopping to rest on his cane and stare mindlessly at skidding, crashing cans and cradled fruit. I wonder if I had seen what wasn’t there. But even if he stopped to rest—that is a gift that none of us possessed, to stop and rest in a grocery store. And I paused for a moment that morning, and suddenly saw a different life, a different perspective, a different pace. That moment captured me and stopped. I remember I loved the concept of life, the way this wonder was embodied in the nonbreathing, trembling tulip petals of a flower to the unborn baby learning to think. I loved the way life is influenced by nonliving rumbles of sound in the skies, connected by non-living electric pulses between machines that moved but didn’t live, and continued through invisible relationships that shape life itself. I remember my first reaction, my pity and sorrow, and then my second. I had pitied a man who lived, who redefined life as stillness as well as energy. I walked out the door to my car and hoped to remember him. To remember life.
And I have. Sometimes, when the dance lets up, usually very early in the morning, I stop and see, for a moment, what he did. Breath and rest—remember that contentment is not efficient accomplishment. I look at the milk and remember what it tastes like, what it is to taste instead of eat and run simultaneously. I look at the child holding the cart and imagine what it’s like to have one foot riding in the air above the floor. I look at the customer who wearily brings me his MidAmerica bill and attempt to make him smile. The moments don’t take long, but change everything. I enjoy the dance still, but I also remember that sometimes, watching the dance is as alive as joining it. I remember to enjoy sight and sound as much as energy, the slower pace as much as the faster.

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